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Queen of Darkness by ~jaguaresz:iconjaguaresz:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Nature > Song


Her radiant face glows from the reflection of the sun
Half in darkness, half in light
White as pearls, her eyes shining and bright
Soft cracks and scars wander across her chin
No one but her knows the mystery that lies
In the darkness of the forests and valleys
Only she knows the stories and the legends of the night.
©2008 ~jaguaresz
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Submitted: July 15
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This poem is about the moon. It's rather short, because I couldn't think of anything else! XP
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~mosobot64:iconmosobot64: Jul 15, 2008, 10:12:05 AM
The old crone on the moon is a kindly old lady, weaving spells of goowill and watching over us all.....:D

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~AlienLazer:iconAlienLazer: Jul 17, 2008, 9:15:42 PM
Upon reading this I wouldn't have guessed that you were talking about the moon. I would have likely thought it was an old woman living in the forest. lol
I love how enchanting you made the moon sound. :heart:

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DREAMS..
An evidence that eternal night
can never extinguish the star of hope.
_ Alfred Castner King (poet)
*faderillaz:iconfaderillaz: Jul 21, 2008, 1:00:38 PM
whoah!! I would never guessed you were talking about the moon!

I thought to a witch or something, and this prove you did an eccellent work with similitudines °_°

I doo love it and I dooo love the moon!

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~ab-insula-Avalonia:iconab-insula-Avalonia: Aug 12, 2008, 7:48:33 PM
I like it and the imagery you use. It is a beautiful poem.

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