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All Deviations
All Deviations


The glow of the city lights
Casts a shadow on me
The beauty and the radiance
Becomes swallowed by the sea


My wings flutter gently in the wind
My heart beating swift
I'm closer to my dream, I can see it running from me
In anticipation I make a daring leap
And fall out of the sky

I hear my heart shatter,
And I let out an earthshattering scream
For I had failed
In chasing after my dream.
©2008 ~jaguaresz
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Should I give up...?
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~mosobot64:iconmosobot64: Jul 6, 2008, 5:23:19 PM
No, no you shouldn't. :p

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~AlienLazer:iconAlienLazer: Jul 7, 2008, 8:08:00 PM
Aww.. sad.
Don't ever give up unless it is truely what you want to do
..with ever cell in your body. :\

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~ab-insula-Avalonia:iconab-insula-Avalonia: Jul 8, 2008, 2:52:41 PM
Beautiful and sad.
And no, don't give up. =)

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~LuckYPennYY17:iconLuckYPennYY17: Jul 29, 2008, 1:34:15 PM
it's a sad but good poem
don't give upppppppppppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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*faderillaz:iconfaderillaz: Aug 19, 2008, 9:09:11 AM
you have a special talent for poetries/songs, hope someday you will write happier ones, as for now use those to get free from sadness.

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